“If you’re asking if Max fainted, you owe me ten bucks. He turned green during the solo, but his knees never buckled.” She nodded in Max’s direction. He was dancing something barely recognizable as the Twist with his grandmother.
“I thought I had a sure thing on that one. How many bets have you won now?”
From Courting Sparks, chapter 1
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