Sunday, March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

“If you’re asking if Max fainted, you owe me ten bucks.  He turned green during the solo, but his knees never buckled.”  She nodded in Max’s direction.  He was dancing something barely recognizable as the Twist with his grandmother.
“I thought I had a sure thing on that one. How many bets have you won now?”


From Courting Sparks, chapter 1

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11 comments:

  1. Nice snippet! I'll be back for more next week.

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  2. Charmingly drawn characters in just six sentences. Great job!

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  3. love your writing style! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

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  4. Heh, this sounds like it's going to be a fun story :)

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  5. Nice six! Great interplay between characters.

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