Saturday, September 17, 2011

Sweet Saturday Sample

From CEOs Don't Cry:
Genre: Sweet romance


“Hi,” the man said as he balanced on the ladder, then climbed down. He tossed a flashlight into an open toolbox.  Then he looked at her with bright blue eyes and hair littered with cobwebs.
Watching him descend the ladder was the best part of her day.  Not that getting transferred here and spending four hours driving on snowy roads constituted a stellar one.  His jeans and t-shirt clung in just the right places and she couldn’t help but smile back at the grin on his face.  


CEOs Don't Cry is available in hardcover on Amazon.com

9 comments:

  1. "Then he looked at her with bright blue eyes and hair littered with cobwebs.
    Watching him descend the ladder was the best part of her day."
    Two more awesome sentences that grab me this week.
    Fab sample. :-)

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  2. How could she not smile back? He sounds delectable. Great sample.

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  3. Loved this. Especially the descriptions.

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  4. Love the contrast between him and the daily drive.

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  5. Nice imagery of a hero. Can't wait to read my copy!

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  6. You have to love a man on a ladder!
    Nice sample! It made me want to read more.

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  7. A smile was definitely in order. Thanks for this sample!

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  8. Hair littered with cobwebs. Great line.
    Gunnar

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  9. This was ymmy! I want to read more about these two. :)

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