Sunday, September 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday


From CEOs Don't Cry:

Watching him descend the ladder was the best part of her day.  Not that getting transferred here and spending four hours driving on snowy roads constituted a stellar one.  His jeans and t-shirt clung in just the right places and she couldn’t help but smile back at the grin on his face.  
“Problems up there?” she asked, heat rising in her cheeks.  She didn’t see men like this in the city very often. 
           “Did Minnie send you? Or Yvonne?” he asked, his gaze traveling over her body.  




Six Sentence Sunday


CEOs Don't Cry is available in hardcover on Amazon

7 comments:

  1. Sounds like mutual attraction to me. ;)

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  2. Love that his hunk is looking her over. Very sexy without being overt. Great six, super writing!! Now I need to know more, like who did send her?

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  3. I like the snapshot in the story that this provides. It tells a lot about the book in so few sentences. Excellent six!

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  4. Great six. Nice continuation from yesterdays

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  5. Sound intriguing.

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  6. Maybe because of where you're dropping us in, but I was confused with what you meant in the second sentence... do you mean she has to drive 4 hours every day to get to work? if so is that one way or total? Or did you mean she had to drive/move there which is four hours away from where she used to live?

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  7. @1000th.monkey - she had to move 4 hours away. Thanks for stopping by.

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