Saturday, August 27, 2011

Sweet Saturday Samples


He couldn’t wait to get Judi out of his garage and out of his truck. How was he supposed to concentrate when she hung around his garage with that swaying ponytail?


Ponytails always revved his imagination. His fingers itched to tug the elastic out and watch her hair tumble down around her face.


He had no idea what he had done in the twenty minutes since her car arrived in his garage. He’d been concentrating on not staring at her or ticking her off.


From Sucker for a Hot Rod.

8 comments:

  1. Nice way to show his attraction to her. I've got this on my TBR list!

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  2. Oh, that's fabulous. It says so much about him as a character, including his attraction to her. Nicely done.
    Gunnar

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  3. No question about it. He got it BAD for her. Great snippet

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  4. Thanks everyone for stopping by!

    Patty, I hope you enjoy it.

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  5. I like the comment about ponytails. :)

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  6. What a great sample! It's a great read.

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