His fingers shook.
“Judi Montgomery, will you marry me?” He opened the box and a square cut diamond winked at her against the cushioned white satin.
“What?” She hadn’t meant to say it out loud, but it slipped out. This was a bit more than an oil filter.From Sucker for a Hot Rod available from Astraea Press.
Six Sentence Sunday.
Just a bit more than an oil filter. ;) Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteWoot! Quite a bit more. :) Fun six.
ReplyDeleteLove the last line!
ReplyDeleteYou have totally hooked me! I love his nervousness and her response is stellar. Totally going on my TBR list.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Great last line!
ReplyDeleteYes, it's a tad more than an oil change he's proposing. Great six!
ReplyDeleteGreat last line.
ReplyDeleteLOL @ oil filter!
ReplyDeleteLove the six, love the novel title :)
Nice six. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI love the contrast of oil filter and diamond ring in white satin. Very clever six.
ReplyDeleteLove the snippet. Wonder what she'd have said if it was an oil filter.
ReplyDeleteLOL
ReplyDeleteLove that last line!
"What?"
ReplyDeleteAnyone who hasn't yet picked this book up really ought to!
More than an oil filter...nice! Going to have to check this book out.
ReplyDeleteLori
LOL! Love her 'what?' Such an honest reaction. Very witty!
ReplyDelete