Saturday, July 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

From work in progress Locations of the Heart:


“You’ve been seeing actual ghosts at the Lilac Bower? You didn’t say anything,” Edith said, peering at the man’s gadget.

Minnie gave her a look. Edith had better not blow this.

Edith’s eyes widened and she gasped. “Oh. Oh. Yes!  I heard those noises too.” She nodded emphatically. “Ver-ry creepy.”

That performance wasn’t going to win Edith an Oscar, but the ghost hunters didn’t seem to notice.




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Six Sentence Sunday

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5 comments:

  1. Joselyn VaughnJuly 16, 2011 at 6:55 PM

    Oops posted a day early. Should have checked the calendar. :-)

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  2. gemma parkesJuly 17, 2011 at 6:08 AM

    Great! Short and to the point!

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  3. Sherry GloagJuly 17, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    Hope to read more of this next week :-)

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  4. Sandy NachlingerJuly 17, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    I like the nonverbal communication. A look can say so much! Good six.

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  5. AlixJuly 18, 2011 at 3:12 AM

    Well done! a great six.

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