Sunday, May 15, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

He couldn’t wait to get Judi out of his garage and out of his truck. How was he supposed to concentrate when she hung around his garage with that swaying ponytail?


Ponytails always revved his imagination. His fingers itched to tug the elastic out and watch her hair tumble down around her face.


He had no idea what he had done in the twenty minutes since her car arrived in his garage. He’d been concentrating on not staring at her or ticking her off.


From Sucker for a Hot Rod.

Six Sentence Sunday

15 comments:

  1. I just read this line yesterday and I enjoyed it all over again. You know a man is gone for a woman when he's waxing poetical over her hair!

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  2. Love this! Ponytail obsession is so descriptive of his feelings. Want to read the rest. Bought it, just have to make the time. Great post!

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  3. He's so going to mess up the direction his thoughts are going. Love the ponytail visual.

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  4. Thanks so much everyone for stopping by and thanks to Jennifer and Jean for buying a copy. You've made my day!

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  5. Better not drive the car out of there. No telling what wire might have come loose!

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  6. This one sounds like a lot of fun!

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  7. Great job. Sounds like a fun read.

    Best,
    Allure

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  8. Interesting tension here! Great six!

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  9. Doing a great job building the tension. Great SSS.

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  10. I've been enjoying your Six Sentence posts for about a month now. The whole premise of this book is a hoot! Thanks so much for posting.

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