Sunday, March 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Twisting the elastic back into her hair, she snapped the compact shut and tossed it back in her purse. What did it matter how she looked? This wasn’t a date.
Then she remembered the outline of his pectoral muscles under that clingy t-shirt. She rooted around in her purse for her mascara and lipstick and snatched her compact. A little refresher wouldn’t hurt.


From Sucker for a Hot Rod, coming Tuesday from Astraea Press

Six Sentence Sunday

13 comments:

  1. a little refresher NEVER hurts lol.

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  2. Nice job. Love the description and flow from her POV. I want to know what happens next. :)

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  3. Nice snippet. A refresher is always a good idea!

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  4. Laff! I love it - so honest and real! Great job!

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  5. BTW, I love the title, too.
    Cara
    http://www.carabristol.com

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  6. good job on showing her indecisiveness. when in doubt, refresh

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  7. How cute! Hope it's as good as she's afraid to hope it'll be!

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  8. It's always best to look our best! LOL. Great lines!

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  9. Mmm, I'm liking the sound of these muscles :)

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